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Read this. No don’t! Yes, do.

My new mystery thriller, Deficit of Diligence, is out now! It’s a sequel to the earlier Alternative Outcome, and follows the fortunes of downbeat journalist and would-be novelist Mike Stanhope as he settles into his new life in the West Country.

As you’ll quickly find out, he doesn’t actually get much breathing space. He’s soon on the move to the north of England, where a lot happens to him in a remarkably short time. His part-time boss has an assignment for him there, and he also has his own agenda – to find out more about a mysterious legacy.

But here’s a bit of a puzzle. I want to promote my new novel, but for people who haven’t read the first novel, the new one contains spoilers. So what should my message be? I want to say, “My new book is out, but please don’t read it – read the other one.” Yet that sounds daft!

Deficit of Diligence - link to Amazon book page

Deficit of Diligence – the new mystery drama from Peter Rowlands

I suppose it’s wonderful when anybody reads any book of mine, so perhaps I shouldn’t worry too much about who reads what, or in which order. But I don’t want to deter people from reading the first book by letting them find out too much about it in the second. Is this a problem for all series writers?

All I can say is, if you like the sound of my new book but you haven’t read the first one yet, you’ll find it will pay you to start there. But if you’re determined to lunge straight into the second, please don’t let me stop you!

 

  
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Can logistics be exciting?

Certainly! Read my new mystery drama, Deficit of Diligence, and then you’ll believe me. High drama in the high-bay, conspiracy on the conveyor line, hijacking on the highway – not to mention overstocking in the warehouse and financial finagling on the fiscal front.

Oh, and then of course there’s a deficit of diligence: due diligence, that is. A company acquisition is on the agenda, but the course of true love isn’t running smoothly. (Or is that another part of the plot?)

If all this sounds a bit mad, don’t worry. Deficit of Diligence is a proper mystery drama. You can sail through the logistics bits without knowing a single thing about them. But if you do know the business, you should find yourself smiling in recognition – or maybe in disbelief!

Deficit of Diligence - link to Amazon book page

Deficit of Diligence – the new mystery drama from Peter Rowlands

So what’s the book really about? Well, it follows the fortunes of downbeat journalist Mike, whom we met in the first novel of this series, Alternative Outcome. He’s just learned about an unexpected legacy from an unknown benefactor in north-east England, so he’s happy when he’s sent there with his job. He hopes he’ll find out what it’s all about.

Instead, some bad decisions result in conflict with his colleagues, and his efforts to put things right soon lead him into deadly danger. It takes every ounce of his resource to get his life back on an even keel.

Like its predecessor, Deficit of Diligence is fast-paced and strong on character, and is packed with lively dialogue. And it’s driven by not one mystery but several, including that of a girl Mike spots in an ancient film. Who is she, and could she have a bearing on his legacy?

The logistics backdrop is there all the way through, but it’s never obtrusive. The focus is on the people, and on how the various plot lines will be resolved.

Logistics? Exciting? Well, maybe not as such, but I’m finding that the subject offers a vivid context for some engrossing mysteries. I hope you agree.

  
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E-book technology? Don’t make me go back!

When I published my first Kindle novel, some of my acquaintances bent over backwards to read it – even the self-confessed luddites. A few of them read it on laptop screens, even on smartphones. At least one was actually inspired to buy her first Kindle in order to get hold of it. Their support was as remarkable as it was touching.

Yet a few were unrepentant. Their message was, “Sorry, I’d love to read your book, but I can’t stand e-books. Let me know when it appears in paperback form.”

Initially, this reaction used to leave me completely bemused.

I found myself grumbling that either such people didn’t understand the vast gulf between aspirational self-publishing and getting published in print – and by implication the massive weight of expectation they were dumping on my shoulders – or else this was a coded message saying they wouldn’t give any credence to my book unless and until it was endorsed by the establishment publishing community.

In some ways I still feel that initial disappointment at their attitude, but I’ve reluctantly come to accept it. Some people really do find e-book technology daunting, and even if their objections are more aesthetic than practical, I have to admit I once felt like them.

When I bought my first Kindle, I expected to go into mourning for all the printed books I wouldn’t be buying in future. Every physical book has its own feel – the sheer heft, the font, the point size, the line spacing, the column height and width, the colour and texture of the paper, the smell, even the way the spine wrinkles (or doesn’t) as you progress. How could I live without all this differentiation?

Content, not form

However, in practice I found I didn’t really miss any of it. I wanted the content, not the form. After all, authors don’t make these choices; they’re down to the publisher or even the printer. They’re arbitrary. There’s nothing missing or deficient in an electronic version of a novel; it’s simply words coming out of the writer’s head and going into yours.

Apart from the obvious attraction of compactness, you get a book that always remembers where you’re up to, and where you can look up words you might not know in situ.

That doesn’t mean readers shouldn’t enjoy the idiosyncrasies of printed books, and I certainly see the benefits if it’s a picture book or a book where the design itself is an important element. I also admit it can be harder to jump around in a e-book, perhaps looking for the first instance of a character whose origins you’ve forgotten.

All I can say is that in the realm of novels, I found the transition to e-books more or less painless. There may be a few trade-offs, but to me there was no contest.

Why would I ever want to go back?

 

  
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How long should it take to write a novel?

When it comes to the time it takes to write a book, some authors are ponderously slow, yet others seem capable of performing at breakneck pace. Gustave Flaubert apparently took five years to write Madame Bovary. At the other extreme, I keep reading about self-published authors who are able to write and publish an entire novel in just two months. To me that is quite astounding.

So what is in fact reasonable? Well, if you take some of the world’s best-known thriller writers as a guide – people like David Baldacci, Lee Child and CJ Box – they seem to produce about one book a year.

That sounds reasonable, especially when you consider that they probably have numerous other public commitments to keep up with alongside their writing. Or is it?

Arguably a relatively unknown novelist will be less in demand than they are, and might therefore be able to product a book more quickly than they can; but then again, an unknown writer might well still have a day job, which will reduce the available writing hours drastically.

In both cases, surely you also need to allow some time for the book to be edited and fine-tuned? In addition, some writers will want feedback from others before publishing – a kind of peer review, if you like.

And finally, what about thinking time? In my experience, complex plots and highly-developed characters don’t spring to life overnight. These things need time to mature as you ponder and refine them. There has to be a gestation period.

So how do those speed-writers put together a novel in eight weeks? That could involve producing eighty thousand words, or ten thousand per week: in other words, nearly fifteen hundred words a day, every day. And that’s without allowing any time for plotting, planning, correcting, editing, publishing and promoting.

Well, determination and commitment probably play a big part here, and presumably also a willingness to forego other activities in pursuit of the single-minded goal of producing another book.

But there’s more to it than that. A key factor is that self-publishing seems to favour writers with multiple books to their name. In purely numerical terms, having more books available is almost bound to mean more sales overall – whether those sales are measured in thousands or in penny numbers. It’s simple mathematics.

On top of this, these writers’ books tend to feed off each other, helping to raise the author’s overall profile. The theory (and apparently it can work remarkably well) is that readers who like one book by that author will buy another and another – especially if the books form a series about the same characters.

I’m not saying these fast-track books are bad, by the way. I haven’t put any specifically to the test, so I don’t know. But I’ve just taken five months to write a follow-up to my first book, Alternative Outcome, and I can’t seriously imagine taking much less time and still maintaining adequate quality. As it is, I haven’t finished the reviewing and editing process yet.

But can I afford that luxury? Or should I hurry up and write books more quickly myself? Well, I can see the attraction, but I just can’t imagine how I would do it. I always feel I need time for reviewing and re-writing: not because I’m searching for that perfect phrase, but because I want to avoid mistakes like repeated words and phrases, unnoticed clichés, logical flaws in the plot.

Maybe I err too far in the Flaubert direction, though I certainly don’t intend to. Perhaps I need more discipline. But I’m afraid that if writing books in two months is a shortcut to fame and fortune, it’s one that will continue to evade me.

 

  
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The serial: killer formula or cop-out?

Are serial novels cop-outs, or do they represent just as legitimate and valid an art form as stand-alone novels?

When I started writing novels, I vowed to myself that I would never write a series of books about the same characters. It seemed like an admission of defeat. I would only write stand-alone novels. Yet now I have. I’ll be launching my latest novel on my web site in the next few weeks, and it’s a follow-up to my first. Why?

I could sit here and think up lots of artistic reasons for my decision, but if I’m brutally honest, there’s one driving motivation, and it’s much more nakedly practical. I want readers! I judged that since people seemed to like my first novel (and some even asked for a follow-up), I would be much more likely to attract readers to a second book about the same characters than I would to a stand-alone work about new people in an unfamiliar context.

Having taken that decision, I must say I found it a delight to revisit my existing characters. I realised they’d lived on in my head, and now I could bring them back to life on the page as well, and explore them further. But I have to admit I was strongly prompted by all the advice on the web, indicating that e-books in particular benefit in marketing terms when they’re part of a series.

Readable and compelling

So was this a sell-out? Well, according to my own tenets, yes! Yet in practice I would defend my decision. I think (hope!) I’ve succeeded in creating a readable and compelling story with most of the right elements – fast pace, mystery, excitement, strong characters, lively dialogue, and a succession of surprises and reverses: many of the same ingredients, in fact, that you might expect in a stand-alone story. At the same time there are some teasing moral puzzles, and there’s an underlying theme about a challenged relationship. The course of true love doesn’t always run smooth.

Serial dramas are everywhere

The fact is that the world abounds with serials. They’re everywhere. In the world of thriller novels we have Michael Connelly’s Harry Bosch, Lee Child’s Jack Reacher and CJ Box’s Joe Pickett: characters in fantastically successful and popular works. On television, serials are among the most popular dramas: the long-running Silent Witness, DCI Banks, Sherlock. Even in cinema, there’s an increasing emphasis on follow-ups. Look at the recent launch of the new Jason Bourne blockbuster, years after the original series. To the film makers, follow-ups usually represent a safe bet.

But how do you constantly reinvent existing characters?

Here’s the problem. Historically, drama has concerned sets of characters confronting choices, contending with temptation and threat, learning new things about themselves, and ultimately refocusing their lives. Relationships often lie at the heart of the story: love and loss, and learning to live with unexpected outcomes.

But how can the lead characters in ongoing dramas keep on refocusing their lives, keep on striking up new relationships, keep on emerging as wiser people? The answer is that in many respects they can’t. So instead of all this, we end up simply following the ups and downs of their established lives: all very well, but we miss out on the kind of intense personal crisis that may come only once in the average person’s lifetime.

That doesn’t mean serial dramas aren’t valid. Of course they are. I love those TV serials, and I’ve read every Harry Bosch novel that’s been written. But sometimes the writers and developers of these serials are forced to stretch the story lines in order to create the tension that the drama demands. Harry Bosch, for instance, veers from one relationship to another over the years. Nothing wrong with that, but if this propensity is the only way to weave fresh relationships into serial stories, arguably it limits the kind of leading character you can write about.

Stand-alone or soap – a fine line

A fundamental challenge for the serial writer is that of creating a complete work with its own internal dynamic (in other words, with a unique proposition and resolution), while at the same time including the logical and coherent undercurrents of the continuing story. Veer too far in the stand-alone direction and the ongoing elements are sacrificed; veer too far the other way and you can end up with the worst kind of soap.

Another potential problem with serial novels is that the writer may feel exempt from the need to define and refine the attributes of the leading characters in every book; he or she may assume that the reader is already familiar with them, and doesn’t need reminding what they’re like. There’s logic to this, but taking such an approach too far means the individual books can never be regarded as complete works with their own integrity, and will always remain merely parts of a larger whole.

Enough room for both approaches?

I hope my own attempt at a serial follow-up meets many of these objections, and functions effectively as a free-standing work; and if readers agree, I see no reason not to write a third. Yet I can still see the attractions of writing true stand-alone books about people at the crisis point of their lives, forced to rethink many of their existing assumptions, and perhaps embarking on one-off relationships that appear to be enduring. I hope I have the nerve to pursue this approach as well.

Part of the solution, of course, lies with readers. Those who love ongoing stories shouldn’t be denied them, but hopefully there will always be enough readers who are prepared to tackle books about new, unfamiliar characters – and enough writers to create an entire world, with all its characteristics and dynamics contained within the confines of a single book.

 

  
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How can you tell if a self-published book is a good book?

Every single self-published author deserves credit. They’ve all grasped the nettle, written their book, wrestled with the technical and procedural challenges of self-publishing, and got their book out there.

Yet the “establishment” – and that includes both traditional publishers and seasoned readers – still seems to have profound reservations about self-published books. If these books are as good as conventionally published books, people reason, why aren’t they in fact published in that way?

Well, in pursuit of getting my own first book online, I’ve now had occasion to examine dozens of self-published books by other writers, and I have two broad generalisations to make about them.

  1. There are some very impressive self-published books out there; BUT
  2. A lot of self-published books have flaws of one kind or anther.

OK, so what do I mean by flaws? Well, here’s a quick run-down:

  1. Self-conscious prose that simply doesn’t flow smoothly, and doesn’t have a comfortable rhythm and cadence.
  2. Stilted dialogue, in which characters are simply recounting events, not talking naturally to each other.
  3. Rapid introduction of multiple characters who aren’t clearly defined, making it difficult for readers to follow the plot or form a clear impression of who everyone is.
  4. Emphasis on irrelevant details – the type of food being eaten, the décor of the room, what clothes the characters are wearing. Sure, these things sometimes expand on the plot or the characters, but in bad books they’re often introduced gratuitously in place of real narrative substance.
  5. Blatantly incorrect use of words – usually a word used mistakenly in place of another that sounds a bit like it.
  6. Poor punctuation – for instance, failure to put commas at both ends of a parenthetical phrase, and failure to introduce or terminate quoted speech properly.
  7. Kindle formatting errors such as double instead of single spacing after full stops, and failure to separate sections of a chapter from each other visually.

In most cases, the author presumably thought he or she was on top of all these things and needed no help, or else wasn’t prepared to invest the time or money to get a second opinion (and preferably to get some professional editing done). Yet in the worst cases, they’re not only short-changing whatever readers they can muster up; they’re also parading their own ignorance before the world.

The sad thing is that basic blemishes can reduce even quite promising books from the status of “worth reading” to “only worth reading if you’re ready to make allowances”. And who wants to read a book like that?

As a lifetime editor, sub-editor and contributor to business magazines, I know something about all this, even though until now I’ve never worked in the world of fiction. And the depressing realisation I’ve come to is that in many ways the establishment is right – a lot of self-published books really are inferior to conventionally published books. Not all, but quite a lot.

I say this without any intention of criticising or undermining other self-published writers. As I’ve said, they all deserve credit. But I feel there’s a need to sound an alert over the hidden dangers awaiting the inexperienced. If you’re not sure whether your writing is good or bad, my advice would be to find someone to advise you – don’t just put your work on sale and hope for the best.

All this being said, self-publishing offers some genuine gems – books as good as anything you’ll find from the big five publishers. Probably they’ve been self-published purely through the author’s impatience with the traditional route. The problem for such authors is that there seems to be no clear route to differentiation. How nice it would be if there were some astounding computer program out there that could evaluate any book in seconds, and would simply declare, “Yes, this is a ‘proper’ book,” or “No, this is not a ‘proper’ book.”

Alas, there isn’t. Instead, both writers and readers are reliant on the goodwill of book reviewers. But even reviewers may not recognise the underlying reasons why they like or dislike a given book. They might comment adversely on the plot, the structure or the characterisation, not recognising the weaknesses in the literary style and presentation that have made these factors so evident. Still, reviewers do their best, so all credit to them for that.

But as a reader, how do you assess the quality of a self-published book? Well, my acid test is to dive into chapter 2 or chapter 3 (in other words, pick a point after we’ve got past the bravura prologue and any scene-setting passages). See how well the prose reads once the author has found his or her pace. If it doesn’t convince by that stage, you have your answer.

 

  
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Many thanks for the plot idea, MT!

It’s gratifying to know that the transport and logistics magazine Motor Transport has run a short piece about Alternative Outcome in its “Highwayman” gossip column (21 March 2016), complete with front cover illustration. Grateful thanks, MT, for your support.

It was a little sobering, though, to read in the piece that “Peter Rowlands … claims to have written for this very publication, but no one here remembers him.” Sic transit gloria mundi, perhaps. All I can say in mitigation is that I don’t think I know anyone currently working at MT, so why should anyone there know me?

That said, this apparent willingness to doubt the past does suggest the makings of some kind of plot line involving having one’s earlier life questioned. So thanks, MT, for the possible story lead!

For the record, I certainly did write for MT: literally dozens of feature articles over a very long period. Unfortunately they probably all pre-date the era when the magazine was archived digitally, so perhaps there’s nowhere to look them up electronically.

However, you’ll find me buried somewhere in your vaults in the printed versions. I still have cuttings of a lot of my own articles, but unfortunately they’re rather inaccessibly boxed up in a self-storage unit, otherwise I’d have scanned one to prove the point.

As for Highwayman’s comments about the difficulty of imagining anything exciting about “the cold, hard reality” of working somewhere like MT Towers (as he describes it), well, my leading character, Mike, has exactly that view of his job as a freelancer. He’s not at all excited by it; he can barely force himself to write the articles he’s offered. The plot takes off when he finds himself forced into alternative (and to some extent unwelcome) ways of spicing up his life.

Nevertheless, he still has to pay his bills, so he navigates a series of press activities and events, and they end up delivering part of the plot. But it’s certainly not dull! Read it and you’ll see what I mean.

  
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Starting as you mean to go on

Alternative Outcome starts with a chance meeting at the doors leading from the concourse at Euston station out to the forecourt. But what do those doors actually look like?

For years they were hinged glass doors that you had to push or pull to open. There was a whole row of them. They always struck me as surprisingly old-fashioned for a station that otherwise seemed pretty modern. And originally I featured doors like these on the first page of the book.

Luckily I happened to be in the area one day, and on a whim I went to the station to see if the doors still looked like that. No they didn’t! The old hinged doors had been replaced by automatic sliding doors. Quite different.

Ouch! Hastily I rewrote a few phrases in the first few paragraphs of the prologue. No longer do the two characters nearly bump into each other as they pass through the doors. Instead, they perform that little dance that you get when two people step first to one side, then the to other as they try to walk past each other. Actually I prefer it the way it is now.

But it just shows the value of doing your research.

Doors to Euston station - as now featured in Alternative Outcome

Doors to Euston station – as now featured in Alternative Outcome

 

  
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Transport press mentions

If you published a book with a transport and logistics background, where better to look for readers than the transport press? So I sent out a press release about Alternative Outcome to the relevant trade and business press.

And they’ve done me proud! A number of transport news websites seem to be picking up on the story, including those below.

No doubt the links will slide off the home pages of these web sites in due course, and disappear into a back corner of the sites in question. Still, they’ve given me my moment of glory!

Therefore can I say thank you to all editors who have recognised a cry for support from one of their own. Your goodwill is much appreciated.

I believe some of the above are also planning to run something in their print editions, including Freight Business Journal. That could be even more useful in the long run.

Here are the links to a few early mentions:

Freight Business Journal (FBJ)

Haulage Today

HGV UK

HGV Ireland

Industry Today

 

  
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No Kindle? No problem!

Since the launch of Alternative Outcome, several people have asked me how they can read the book if they have no Kindle. Well, there are loads of options! You can read it on almost any tablet computer, or even on a smartphone (which works surprisingly well). And of course you can read it on a laptop or desktop computer. Here’s a quick reminder:

Android tablet / iPad
Download the free Kindle app from the appropriate app store, then buy the book from the Kindle website via your tablet.

Smartphone
Download the free Kindle app from the appropriate app store, then buy the book from the Kindle website on your phone. There are apps for Android, iOS and Windows Phone.

Laptop or desktop PC or Mac
Go to the Amazon website, open my book page (see link below), and look for the small “Read it with our Free App” link under the “Kindle edition” box. This gives you a dialog box where you can choose your kind of computer and download the app to install. Then buy the book from the Amazon book page.

No app – read it in the cloud!
Amazon also has a thing called a “Cloud reader”, which allows you to open Kindle books that you’ve bought in a normal web browser without actually downloading anything, using a special Kindle app that runs within the browser. You just have to be online whilst reading it. Go to the Amazon website, open my book page (see link below), and look for the small “Read it with our Free App”.

Reading on smartphones
Reading a book on a typical smartphone works amazingly well. After a minute or two you completely forget you’re looking at a phone. The text should be sharp and clear, and you can re-size it through the Kindle app. A phone is easier to hold and flick through than a tablet, and is particularly handy if you’re standing up in a tube train!

Here’s the link to my Amazon page again:
http://www.amazon.co.uk/Alternative-Outcome-Peter-Rowlands-ebook/dp/B01CK1XVHK/

  
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